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I looked at you from outside the window
of your large grey house
for me, it was nothing more than
finding you in your own cold mind

I stood there, waiting, 
numb feet and salty hair
and mem'ries of good o'l days,
pirouetting away

the way the sky
changes colors from dusk to dawn
reminds me of a love
I have always known
(have only known)

your world, your labyrinth,
your pain
i want to take
them all together
as your eyes contain the storm,
i want to take you all together

and now I'm standing here, waiting
numb feet and salty hair
looking at you from outside the window
while the sky changes colors --
from dusk to dawn

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28 comments:

  1. o, mysterious one this poem is a beauty, wrapped in memories and longing tied with a
    bow of love.

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    1. thanks paige! i see that you're also writing for magpie! it's been so long since i wrote one ♥

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  2. oh, haze. such a beautiful poem. =`)

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    1. Thank you so much dear, your comments mean a lot!

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  4. Lovely,haze. Just like you. :)

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    1. You make me smile, ganda :) thank you!xx

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  5. Ah, so THATS why I couldn't comment. Thank goodness! I thought my computer was broken or something. Being able to turn comments off is a handy feature, it saves so much comment-war-drama on controversial documentaries on YouTube.

    Wow, you watched it? Excitement! :D Lol, I'm sorry about the accent. Kiwis talk too fast and mumble a lot ^.^; We also use a lot of lazy slang. eg: Y'right?=Are you alright? Have you ever seen Outrageous Fortune or Scarfies? A kiwi TV series and a NZ movie that was made in my town. Good watching for people who want to hear kiwi-ese XD

    This post was gorgeous, thank you so much. Such beautiful imagery, it's spellbinding.

    Lots of love and hugs and beautiful sunrises to you <3

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    1. Ah! Your comment makes me really excited Peri! hehe (don't know and don't bother =>) Your accent is really cute! Seriously, and just ignore my slow mind processing. I can't use my senses at the same time usually... like listening and watching + adoring. You are adorable, btw.

      Love you too deary! Smile ♥

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    1. coming from a great writer like you, i'm melting! thanks avy xx

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  7. This is simply beautiful ...

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  8. Haze, do you still remember me?
    I'm sorry I haven't been commenting on your posts lately. As you can see, I've been feeling sad from the sudden death of my most loved family member. But I think I am much better now.
    How are you, Haze?
    Your writing is as beautiful as always.

    I love you. xx

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    1. Lili how can i forget you? I was meaning to write you an email but this comment, darling, how are you? My heart goes for you.

      I love you. Please be well.

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    2. p.s. I mean it, please be well.

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  9. Oh, good heavens. You wrote this? I do not mean to doubt you - it's just that it is AMAZING. I thought for a moment that you had stolen it from a book of poetry. Dear Haze, you never fail to astound me. Your world is one of pure beauty. xxx

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    1. And I died! B! I love you! You made me really really happy, these words coming from a great writer like you. Thank you so very much ♥ ♥ ♥

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  10. *dreaming*❤ What? It's already over? *sigh* You really are a talented writer!!!❤

    Many hugs my dear! ❤❤❤❤❤❤

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  11. Reading this, I feel chilled, even on this hot August day, standing beside you. With salty hair.

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It feels like my heart has been bewitched by you and is keeping track of time on it's own.